Ref.:Why don´t you answer,
I fear about you.
Why don´t you look at me,
Why are you lieing there?
Why are you blooding,
are you wounded?
Father, Why don´t you answer ,
answer,answer!!!

1) The war is really heavy,
All my family is down,
and i´m the rest.
Pleas help me god
I don´t know.
Pleas help me, Pleas

Ref.:Why don´t you answer,
I fear about you.
Why don´t you look at me,
Why are you lieing there?
Why are you blooding,
are you wounded?
Mother, Why don´t you answer ,
answer,answer!!!

2) I was sleeping in my bed,
when i suddenly heard a "bang"
But what happends??
Pleas help me god
I don´t know.
Pleas help me, Pleas

Ref.:Why don´t you answer,
I fear about you.
Why don´t you look at me,
Why are you lieing there?
Why are you blooding,
are you wounded?
Sister, Why don´t you answer ,
answer,answer!!!

3) Pleas god take me
all my family is down,
and i´m the rest.
I can´t life anymore,
Pleas take me to you, plaes take me
(base drum->)[boom]

einfach - grausam

Über Rechtschreibung/Grammatik kann ich nicht viel sagen, da mein englisch nicht wirklich gut ist.
Aber dein Songtext hat viele Gefühle die Jemand in so einer Lage wohl erfährt gut wiedergespiegelt.

Wie bist du dazu gekommen diesen Text zu schreiben?

C'ya
Vincent
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Erde halt an ...
... ich will aussteigen

Danke fürs kompliment,
Des is ma anfoch in ana ziemlich gräßlichen Lage eingefallen (hatte in der Familie schwierigkeiten)

Die Fehler sind halt ziemlich arg
Don´t worry be happy! :)